APOSTROPHES do you use them automatically?

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Where have all the [apostrophes] gone, long time ago?

(Peter, Paul and Mary, 'Where have all the flowers gone')




  This BLOG is about the use of apostrophes.

The use of the apostrophe in the English language had its historical beginnings in the 16th century, where it was used to indicate missing letters in English words, this post-dated the French use of apostrophes, l'apostrophe, l'histoire and so on. Shakespeare  inserted apostrophes when letters were missing; letters that no longer represented a sound, "Fie on't! O fie!" "Tis a consummation devoutly to be wish'd". Today we insert apostrophes to denote contracted words used in informal writing, for example, I'm, I am.

In the 17th century printers began to use the 's to denote the singular possessive and later (18th century) the plural possessive s' raised its head.

This apostrophe track, seems to have encountered difficulties with writers' tolerance during the late 20th and early 21st century as regards incorrect use, or lack of use.

IS TEXT MESSAGING TO BLAME?

In text messages there is the trend to use minimum punctuation. It was especially difficult on early mobile telephones to access punctuation with the key board patterned as below:


                       1   2ABC   3DEF
                                                                        To write C the key board
                                                             is pressed 3 times

                                                                 To access  punctuation press number 1, 
                                                                 but who can be bothered after so many 
                                                presses to write a single word.

Is this when individuals stopped using apostrophes?

New mobiles, though, have keyboards similar to the computer keyboard. Far easier to write words and insert punctuation. The question is asked, "Do we want our students ignoring punctuation when using computers or even mobile telephones?

Earlier than the introduction of technical devices the teaching of punctuation and grammatical forms, was largely censured because of the way it was taught - rote learning. At the time there was no method of teaching that satisfied the opponents of rote learning, so widespread teaching of grammar and less used punctuation (e.g. apostrophes, colons, semi-colons, commas) did not happened for approximately forty years. That is probably two generations who have merrily picked up or not confidently acquired the 'bits and pieces' of writing English conventions.

Today's young people are required to adopt varied roles in their interaction with people; they shift, often moment-to-moment between writing personal, informal communications and writing professional, formal communications.

Formal writing demands the correct use of spelling, grammar and punctuation.

In this article the punctuation that is highlighted is the use of apostrophe/noun. Below are samples of insecure use of the apostrophe by ten university students from a class of 24 (2014). The samples come from formal essay writing.

but it is implied through it's ideals of literacy (its (a possessive pronoun, it does not require an apostrophe);

students' in a drama class (students (plural, no apostrophe);

to write appropriately in a range of context's (contexts (plural, no apostrophe);

each individuals learning (individual's (singular possessive);

during a students education (student's (singular possessive);

we should not just pay attention to the students literacy skills as just reading and writing (student's (singular possessive);

may inhibit a students life outside of the classroom (student's (singular possessive);

each students' literacy level (student's (singular possessive)

adolescents schooling (adolescents' (plural possessive);

great understanding to what is necessary in student literacy learning (students' (plural possessive).
...

WHAT ARE THE VARIED COMMON APOSTROPHES FOR STUDENTS TO LEARN?


Contractions and apostrophes

The apostrophe (') is used when writing contracted words e.g. 'haven't' have not, 'wouldn't' would not, it's it is.It indicates that letters have been left out of the word or phrase e.g. isn't (the missing letter being 'o' , the contraction of the phrase 'is not'). The exceptions are possessive pronouns, hers, his, ours, theirs, yours and its - apostrophes are not required.

Contractions are used when recording speech; they are not part of formal writing.


Possession and apostrophes 

The apostrophe is inserted to show something or someone owns something (nouns). This is called the apostrophe of possession. The singular possession apostrophe is inserted before the 's and the plural possession apostrophe is inserted after the s'. For example:

The dog's collar is blue (singular possession, one dog possesses a blue collar);
All the dogs' collars are blue (plural possession, more than one dog has a blue collar).

I stayed at my auntie's home, while my mother visited my brother in hospital (singular possession, one auntie);
I stayed at my aunties' home, while my mother visited my brother in hospital (plural possession, more than one auntie in the home).

What to do with apostrophes when the word ends in -s?

To simplify where apostrophes are placed when nouns end in -s mostly follow the rule associated with singular and plural nouns. Additionally, listen to the way the word is pronounced and proceed from there.
For singular possession add the apostrophe before the 's e.g. Bridget Jones's Diary; Thomas's brother broke the long-jump record; the actress's contract has been signed.

There are exceptions, for example names of organizations e.g. St Thomas' Hospital.

For plural possession, add the apostrophe after the s' e.g. It was originally a girls' school; the building of the house will finish in two weeks' time; Fred must know that his duties include cleaning the horses' stables.

No! Its a plural no apostrophe is needed!
 
The Citizen's of Australia... The Citizens of Australia.
...

Try this activity to assist the automatic writing of apostrophes in continuous print.

Assist the development of spontaneous apostrophe insertion by having a daily SNAP QUIZ. In groups of four, students 'beat the clock'. A set of 5-10 apostrophe problems are set. Individuals in each group complete the task and when they have done so, the designated captain of the group, calls, "SNAP".

Make a set of cards for each group (minus the answers!) and different cards can be handed to the varied groups each day. This will entail secrecy about the content!

Example                SNAP QUIZ  card 1

Place the apostrophe or delete the apostrophe or insert a letter where appropriate.

1. The bus steering wheel was wearing out. (A. The bus's steering wheel was wearing out.)

2. Whats that I hear? (A. What's that I hear? )

3. The students essays were high quality. (A. The students' essays were high quality.)


4. Today is Michaels turn to cook.  (A. Today is Michael's turn to cook.)

5. They sat in the Dr's waiting room. (A. They sat in the doctor's waiting room.)



Example                SNAP QUIZ  card 2
Place the apostrophe or delete the apostrophe or insert a letter where appropriate.                                                         

1. Keatss six odes are famous. (A. Keats's six odes are famous.)

2. The sign said, 'Mens cuts $15'. (A. The sign said, 'Men's cuts $15'.)

3. Doesnt the sound make a difference! (A. Doesn't (or formal writing 'does not') the sound make a difference.)

4. "Not one of our's," she said after examining the book. (A. "Not one of ours," she said after examining the books.)

5. In one weeks ' time, I will be on holiday. (A. In one week's time, I will be on holiday.)



 Example                SNAP QUIZ  card 3

Place the apostrophe or delete the apostrophe or insert a letter where appropriate.

1. Doctors complaints encouraged the publishing of patient feedback. (A. Doctors' complaints encouraged the publishing of patient feedback.)

2. The studys authors think their findings are important. (A. The study's authors think their findings are important.)

3. Donors' are keen to help.   (A. Donors are keen to help.)

4. "Shouldnt  you go on the tram?"  (A. "Shouldn't you go on the tram?")

5. He miss's his family. (A. He misses his family.)

CLAUSES AND COMMAS


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CLAUSES AND COMMAS
 
Where have all the [commas] gone
                            long time passing
(Peter, Paul and Mary, "Where have all the flowers gone?)
 
 
The comma in question in this BLOG is the comma that separates clauses in sentences.
 
Begin learning about clauses
 
The metalanguage when learning about commas is main or independent clause, subordinate or dependent clause, sentence structure and comma.
 
Sentences are made up of clauses. A main clause expresses a complete thought; it makes sense written on its own. Children beginning school learn to write a simple sentence (contains one main clause - a subject (participant) and one verb (process), I can run. They write a main clause and complete the sentence with a subordinate clause. A subordinate clause does not make sense on its own, for example, 'had great fun'.
 
               The children travelled on the bus and had great fun.
                Main clause                                   Subordinate clause
 
 
A subordinate clause that is written first in a sentence should be demarked by a comma.
A subordinate clause, as its name suggests, is subordinate to the main clause in a sentence. If a subordinate clause is removed from the sentence, the sentence would still make perfect sense; the subordinate clause simply provides additional information, description.
 
Showing models:  Clauses and commas, complex sentences
 
Knowing about main clauses and subordinate (sub) clauses is essential learning before examining the placement of commas. Learning about clauses, sub clauses and commas happens when reading and teaching through models in literature and other texts (for example, non-fiction and children's writing), where children see how clauses, sub clauses and commas work within continuous print. Read as widely as possible and implement follow-up activities to reinforce new learning.
Note: finding literature for models of complex sentence form is generally found in more sophisticated children's stories. Younger children's literature is generally written in simple and compound forms.
 
 
 The comma is part of the structure of a sentence. Its function is to make meaning clearer.
 
Subordinate clauses:
 
A subordinate clause is also called a dependent clause (dependent on having a main clause, a subject (participant) and a verb in the sentence. A subordinate clause does not form a complete sentence. It will cause the reader to ask the question, "What happened"; a reader will want additional information to finish the thought.
 
A subordinate (dependent) clause can link the main clause through the use of subordinate conjunctions e.g. although, since, so that, when or relative pronouns e.g. that, who, which.
 
When a subordinate clause is written in front of a main clause use a comnma between the sub clause and the main clause. Your students can test whether a subordinate clause is placed first in the sentence by asking themselves, "Is this a fragment or a complete thought on its own?" If it is a fragment your students will find it necessary to ask, "What happened?", the main clause should answer the question. For example:
 
Subordinate clause - fragment                         comma
thought
After Amy sneezed all over my chicken salad, she threw the salad in the bin.
 
                                                                         "So what happened?"
                                                                         The main clause will tell what
                                                                         happened.
                                                                         It is a complete thought.
 
Examples of the subordinate clause (an incomplete thought) being
placed first in the sentence with a commas following and the main
clause being the last part of the sentence structure:
 
On the foothills, the soil in places was thin and yellow and the trees were only twenty or thirty feet high. Ash Road. (Southall, 1966, p.11).
 
Despite his broken arm and obvious pain he was in, Quen was not allowed to rest throughout the  remainder of the day. Forbidden parts of Thual. (Kelleher, 1983, p. 60).
 
Until he has his first cup of coffee, Grandpa is grumpy. (Amelia, year 4, 2006).
 
Though winter was nearly over, there were patches of snow and ice everywhere. Sarah plain and tall. (MacLachlan, 1998, p. 3).
 
Centuries after his death, Shakespeare is still considered to be England's foremost playwright. (Frederick, year 8, 2006).
 
 
Generally, a comma is not placed after the main clause when a dependent (subordinate) clause follows it:
 
Snakes are scary although they are not always poisonous.
Main clause
 
Smoke swirled through the trees at the edge of the forest.
Main clause
 
 
Embedded clause:
If the sub clause (or phrase 'for example' or word 'however') is embedded in the middle of the main clause, the comma is placed either side of the sub clause. Commas set off clauses that are not essential to the meaning of the sentence.
 
 
Examples of the comma being placed before and after the embedded sub clause:
 
Listening to voices, even one's own, was sort of nice in the dark. Ash Road. (Southall, 1966, p. 16).
 
At first their parents had said no, firmly no, but the boys had nagged and nagged. Ash Road. (Southall. 1966, p. 9).
 
They caught a morning train to the hills, got out at Barkley station, hitched up their packs and started walking. Ash Road (Southall. 1966, p. 10).
 
Graham, who had a flair for that sort of thing, made up a poem about it. Ash Road. (Southall. 1966, p. 10).
 
She lay on her side, a garbled, barely distinct sound coming from her. Red. (Gleeson, 2012. p.1).
 
Chared  paper, frail as butterflies, fluttered in the wind. Hannah and the tomorrow room. (Gleeson, 1999, p.20).
 
Note: two sub clauses
The storm came suddenly, clouds with green underbellies sneaking across the ridges, then descending swifly, carrying a curtain of hail. Charlie's Gold. (French, 1999. p. 5).
 
 
FOLLOW-UP ACTIVITIES
 
CUT UP SENTENCE
Put the sentence(s) in order, with the subordinate clause FIRST and the main clause LAST. Place the comma in the correct spot.
 
grandpa is grumpy                 Until he has his first cup of coffee                     ,
 
 
 
COMPARE
Draw a wriggly line under the sub clause. Draw a straight line under the main clause.
 
After fishing for an hour    the boy rested on the deck.
 
 
 
ADD A SUB CLAUSE
Begin by reading the sentences aloud. Do the two parts make a complete thought?
 
Next, in the middle add a sub clause (fragment, does not make a complete thought or sentence). You can begin the sub clause with a sub conjunction although, who.
 
The child ________________________________, continued crying.
The workers ______________________________, waited for home time.
The wild dog _____________________________, kept barking.
 
 
 
ADD COMMAS
Rewrite each sentence and insert a comma or commas in each sentence.
 
When she was five years old Justine rode a horse.
 
Sweet lollies which taste fantastic are not good for your teeth.
 
My watch which has to be wound up works almost as well as one with a battery.
 
The cat which was a beautiful ginger colour sat on the mat.
 
 
 
 
REWRITE THE SENTENCES
Insert a comma where the full stop is placed.
Discuss with a partner, "Does it work?"
 
At first Helen was not a good student. She did not obey Annie.
 
Right away, Annie saw that Helen was a tall, pretty girl. But she also saw that Helen was not happy.
Helen Keller, Courage in the Dark. ( Hurwitz, 1997. p. 14).
 
 
 
     USE PICTURES TO STIMULATE THE WRITING OF A SUB CLAUSE.
     THEN WRITE A MAIN CLAUSE AND INSERT COMMAS.
 
     DEVELOP QUIZZES (consult Internet)
 
     GAME (Amazon offers a game)
 
 
Extend students' learning. The following sentence has many clauses; the commas have been removed.
See how easy it is to read this information!
 
The latest volume covers what might be called the birth of modern Europe from the Reformation which broke the dominance of the Roman Catholic church to the Treaty of Westphalia which entrenched the idea of nation states.
 
The Economist August 2-8, 2014, v 412, #8898
 
 
 
REFERENCE LIST

French, J. & Nycroft, N. 1999. Charlie’s Gold. Koala Books. N.S.W. Aust.
Gleeson,  Libby. 1999. Hannah and the tomorrow Room. Puffin Books, Penguin. Australia.
Gleeson, Libby. 2012. Red. Allen and Unwin. Crows Nest. NSW.
Hurwitz, J & Vocington, N. Helen Keller Courage in the Dark. Random House Children's Books.
N.Y. USA
Kelleher, V. 1983. Forbidden paths of Thual. Puffin Books. Hamondsworth. UK.
MacLachlan, P. 1998. Sarah plain and tall. Puffin Books. London.UK.
Southall, Ivan. 1966. Ash Road. Puffin Books. Penguin Books. Middlesex. UK.